by prasanna
You're missing a comma/semi-colon/hyphen after the first verse. I think if you change "peeked from" to "peeked through" the imagery would be a bit clearer, but it's fine the way it is. |
by Star
You got it right!!! also it is better “peeked through” |
One of my favorites from your most recent. That's why I had to nominate this one, because it spoke to me the most :) |
by Star
You’re absolutely right about the title :) |