by Star Apr 24, 2020
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
I was given a second chance |
by prasanna
Hi I'm back, I told you that I'll write you a little comment about as to why I think this poem is connected to the other poem which is connected to another poem. |
by Star
The first two are obviously connected. I have to be honest though, sometimes I experiment while writing so there wont be a specific meaning for a poem. But with these three poems, I intended a specific meaning. This one though the connection wasn’t intentional. Strangely the way you put it, it’s very convincing. |
by Mr. Rious
An interesting poem about second chances, renewal, and change. Thank you for sharing! |
by Star
Thank you for the comment :) |
by prasanna
Is this a continuation of 'The Recovery'? Regardless, really like this poem, there's a sense of acceptance and hope in this poem, a measured take with renewed breath. :) |
by Star
Why is everything a continuation of something? Lol it’s not, or maybe unconsciously it is :p |
by prasanna
One of these days, I'll write you a little dissertation as to why I think the poems are linked :p |
by Star
It’s not the only one you linked to that poem, is it? |
This is so hopeful and has just a light cadence to it! I couldn't help but think of reincarnation, passing into another world with a wisdom and maturity, not feeling the burden and instead, freeing your spirit and allowing yourself to absorb the new form. Letting your spirit breathe freely in whatever is next. Or also, making peace with your past, and giving yourself the chance to enjoy the present and see more of the future. Settling into your true sense of self. |
by Star
Thank you ^___^ |
by Ben Pickard
What a beautiful and calming piece of poetry, Star. Lovely. |
by Star
Thank you ^_^ |