This poem really hit a nerve with me. So painful and emotive. It expresses my own feelings as a nurse at this time. Thank you for putting it into words. |
by Star
I got chills reading this. I cant imagine how hard it is now for you, but you I’m sure you’ve done enough<3 |
by Violet Raven
It is always tough to go through the feelings that you are never good enough. Stuff like that plays out in your mind like what can I do better, am i good enough? Etc. I like the reality you painted here as you also dressed up the meaning in metaphors a bit. You really showed the reader what was on your mind. |
by Maple Tree
Thank you everyone <3 Yes Violet, I work for a homeless shelter here in New York :-) |
by Brenda
Hold tight dear friend- I know you are giving it your all....I hope you are getting lots of rest in the middle of this madness. Hugs my friend- |
by Sunshine
The scene is very honest and sad. I can really feel you. I love how poetically you mixed emotions into the actual chore you're doing. I am always into personal input in poems. It really gives this poem authenticity. |