A beautiful refreshing poem. The metaphors are very well picked and the expressions were connected from the opening verse to the last. The flow uninterrupted and the whole scene just complete making so much sense.

Used nature to perhaps reflect a personal story and personal affections, it is so easy to relate actually to many of your lines and to read them from a personal point of view.

Your style is very coherent and interesting. Looking forward for more.

Nature has always been the greatest part of life that gives us hope. nature has manifested a great value of life. throughout all of our sufferings, there is still something to hope for, something to be grateful for. I love the depiction, and images used. your poem has suggested a cycle. our youth, hurt,pain, love, suffering, death and much more that makes us maintain a life. And that, life is revolving around a cycle. whats there to be worried of? when we know hope, pain and suffering are all around us? oh Dear friend, Thank you for such a beautiful piece of art. keep on writing.