by D. May 17, 2020
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Melissa was wearing a tangerine dress |
Woah, I have much more to say than on your other piece, so I will be back for a proper comment! I also have to read again. |
Very well written. The first stanza depicts a lovely picture and the following gradually change the feeling to draw the reader to an inevitable end. That last stanza says so much in its simple three lines. |