Comments : Melissa

  • 4 years ago

    by cassie hughes

    Very well written. The first stanza depicts a lovely picture and the following gradually change the feeling to draw the reader to an inevitable end. That last stanza says so much in its simple three lines.

  • 4 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Woah, I have much more to say than on your other piece, so I will be back for a proper comment! I also have to read again.