Topsoil

by Johnathon   May 20, 2020


Your eyes lit up like a bolero
Upheld by the liveliest of castanets.
Mahler himself would have marveled
At the symphony that was your stare.
Notes then dripped off the score
In the fashion of ink from a pen
Grasped by tortured fingers.

This caution waltz carried on.
Only in my mind was I dancing,
Step by step, invoking the music.
My heart was a bud, blooming
In the solstice of sheer entropy.
Days of wandering the rustic plains
As a seed, cased in dust, were over.

With two hands outstretched,
We then seized the constant,
Bustling mess that haunted us
Throughout our waking life and damned it
By method of artistic digestion.
We trapped the world in melodies,
And, by proxy, it belonged to us.

In time, we grew weary. Features fell
With the descending sun;
Scowls rose as stars aligned.
I pondered the possibility that I
Had sown this all from the thread
Of a tangled mind, wrought with weeds.
The rhododendrons seemed to smile back.

I realized, though, that I was foliage.
I had no roots to call my own-
Possessing no rhythm in this heart of mine.
Silence turned me back into the dirt
I was when we met. It was easier then-
Just a layer of soil with no pattern or swing:
A noise... nothing more, nothing less- free.

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  • 4 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    First, I'd like to say welcome to the site!

    I've read most of the poems you've posted so far, and I have to say, this one hit me the hardest. You give such depth in your verses, and have an eloquent tone, that I had to sit back and read again. The metaphor of just being a layer of soil, of not having roots yet, and the realization that this is freeing in a way.... it made me think of becoming too tangled in someone else, combining their thoughts and our own until we can't separate one from the other.

    You have some fantastic imagery throughout this piece, and I especially noticed how this wasn't "one dimensional". There was growth and a journey you showed the readers, and in the fourth stanza especially, I took it as being admired and drawn into someone, yet revering them too much. Wondering if you made it into something more, if reality became fantasy somewhere along your time together.

    I hope more people are able to read your poetry over the next few months. Though you've just joined, please keep sharing!

    • 4 years ago

      by Johnathon

      I really appreciate that you were able to pick up on all those themes. That’s exactly what I was going for with this one! Thank you for your kind words :)

      This poem is probably my most personal. By that I mean that it’s the truest piece to a specific point in my life that really rattled me at the time. Most of my poetry is abstract and illustrative. So writing this was especially cathartic.

      I’m glad to hear you enjoy my work. That means a lot.

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