by D.
This is a very visceral poem, Maryanne and your voice carries its message well. This is more of a speech than a poem, and the shaky pride that exists throughout this poem is palpable. The injustice is loud, and the final line is silencing. |
Thank you, Daniel. YES to everything you said. 1000x. And I agree about "roaming", thanks for the note, didn't even think of that as a negative connotation when posting. |