*Tear* :(.....This poem is soo sad!!!! Yet its a really great poem!!! Keep it up Sarah. You got talent and never let go of it!!!! Luv u lotz!!! Leah

I can relate to this poem. It's hard to watch your family slip away. Keep your head up and keep writing these wonderful pieces!

This is a very good poem, it is deep and sad...there is a lot of emotion in it, I feel like I can feel how your feeling, u know what i mean? well it was an excellant poem...LiL One