Comments : Missing you

  • 4 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Children are the greatest gift and seeing them grow,
    we too grow and learn many a lesson which we adults learn
    without even learning...a heartfelt write.

    ^Just one thing, a typo here: This change is a my new paradigm-maybe
    remove "a". Unless you meant: This change is a, my new paradigm. Then
    add a coma after the a, but removing the a reads better.

    Keep penning!

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A lovely poem. I know how it feels to be changed forever because of children.

    All the best.