Children are the greatest gift and seeing them grow,
we too grow and learn many a lesson which we adults learn
without even learning...a heartfelt write.
^Just one thing, a typo here: This change is a my new paradigm-maybe
remove "a". Unless you meant: This change is a, my new paradigm. Then
add a coma after the a, but removing the a reads better.
Keep penning!
4 years ago
by Ben Pickard
A lovely poem. I know how it feels to be changed forever because of children.