Comments : That Dark Void

  • 4 years ago

    by Lilychu

    I've been gone for a while, and I must apologise for that. I haven't had any motivation to write a poem. This is based off true feelings with the fear of feeling so down, who knows if I'll make it. With love and support from my family and friends, there's definitely a chance. I don't want to let everything go, and until things get worse, I'm not going to.

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Excellent use of rhyme throughout. Well done.

    • 4 years ago

      by Lilychu

      Thank you. I'd say I've improved that skill, so that means a lot