by D.
I loved this - excellent word choice. I'm not a huge fan of exclamation points in poetry, as they come across a little cheesy. It doesn't distract from the beauty of this poem, though. |
by BOB GALLO
I must complement you for your great style of commenting. You always try, even when is impossible sometimes nowadays, to inject some constructive criticism to the equation. |
by Meena Krish
...yes all ends in nothingness and eventually we all become dust. Good read! |
by BOB GALLO
Good readers. |