I really like the fact that you start at the gate (first obstacle) and then the door (another) before you know it's too late... and, again you are trapped. That's how I interpreted this anyway. What irked me slightly was this in two lines "&" it may be a modern way of writing but I thought it was slightly lazy (sorry)

Didn't take anything away from the poems itself BTW, this is just my personal opinion.

I found this calming and beautiful.

All the best, Rania.

This weak you deserve to scour four