Comments : Wendigo (The Cursed)

  • 4 years ago

    by Star

    I think I’ve said this on every poem you wrote with mythological creatures , I love those poems and I reallyyyy enjoy them.
    The thing is, I know they are based on those creatures but every time I could see a deeper meaning. So this evil spirit here becomes a powerful metaphor for an abusive person. The ending lines compliment that so well that it gave me chills.

    This is such a great write, I was really excited when I saw the title!!

    • 4 years ago

      by D.

      Thank you Star. :) and I'm glad you noticed! I plan to write 10 overall & my father is going to illustrate them!

    • 4 years ago

      by Star

      That sounds fun!!
      I’ll be waiting to read more then :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Cantchangeme

    This is wonderful, I see the story and feel the hunger and the fear. Beautifully done