Comments : This Little Lagoon

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Clever little piece, Lucero. I love the rhyming here.

  • 4 years ago

    by Star

    I dont know how many times I read this, this is so well written!!!

  • 4 years ago

    by D.

    I adore this, Lucero. I don't actually quite now how to put my finger on why! Your poetry is so unafraid and is lacking in overindulgence It's honestly so refreshing.

    I can imagine a mother reading this to a child. It has a lullaby feel to it, and there is something also comforting and playful. I honestly hope this is on the front page next week. :)

    • 4 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Awe thank you guys. It means a lot.