Comments : For You I Would

  • 4 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Aww, I’m not sure what gotten into me or may be it isn’t me, but you guys ( poets from pnq) that are writing this lovely love poems that are making my heart skip a beat. I truly enjoy the read. I just stumbled upon this line:

    If I a shooting star
    Your wishes would come true
    If I could be your sky
    The sun would be in view

    Did you mean “if I WAS a shooting star?”

    • 4 years ago

      by Walter

      Thank you so much Everlasting for your comment and pointing out the above...Yes, it WAS meant to be in there!