Comments : You, Again

  • 4 years ago

    by Skyfire

    Some very lovely imagery here! The first stanza and in particular this line really speak to me, "You could trace your way back to me."

  • 4 years ago

    by D.

    There's something so comfortingly simple and confessional about this. I imagined it as a song, or a prayer of sorts as it feels unplanned and open. Despite the longingness and poignancy, I found the imagery warming, perhaps random, or perhaps specific/a reference to the person you're writing to. Beautiful poem, Noura,