Comments : ripples across the ocean.

  • 4 years ago

    by Star

    Oooh wow !!

  • 4 years ago

    by cassie hughes

    Simply gorgeous. I love the way the sea permeates each part and especially love the line 'the lungs
    fill with air that is very much salted with you.' Very clever.

  • 4 years ago

    by Everlasting

    I like it

  • 4 years ago

    by Gracy Judith

    Beautifully penned! I loved it!

  • 4 years ago

    by Gracy Judith

    Beautifully penned! I loved it!

  • 4 years ago

    by Mahesh Kachare

    What a nice piece of writing.