Duet (Senryu)

by BOB GALLO   Jun 19, 2020


hear the duet of
your question and the silence
of all the answers.

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  • 4 years ago

    by Hellon

    Your first line has 6 syllables if my count is correct but, I feel your words here need a bigger platform, so why not knock the senryu from the title and expand on the content a bit more? I'd be very interested to read the results if you do. Just my thoughts as usual :)

    • 4 years ago

      by BOB GALLO

      You are absolutely right about thee platform.
      Though it was watch first then decided to switch optical to audible, got one syllabus discrepancy
      Thanks

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