Shaping the Night

by Gracy Judith   Jun 24, 2020


what awaits the night
of my radiant dreams
until the break of dawn?

Restless, I tune into
the gentle hum of rain
cutting through the silence,
soothing my thoughts,
tugging me
into its rhythmic spell,
its exquisite tilt,
shaping the night
crescent

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  • 4 years ago

    by D.

    Your language choice is consistently commendable, paying attention to form and word placement too. I love this, especially as it contains one of my favourite words 'lambent'.

    Keep sharing! :)

    • 4 years ago

      by Gracy Judith

      Thank you so much Daniel...I'm glad you liked it. Many thanks for reading and for your feedback.
      You made my day :-)

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Wonderfuly written, Gracy. Elegant and graceful. You are certainly a talented edition to the site. Good to have you here.

    All the best

    • 4 years ago

      by Gracy Judith

      Thank you so very much Ben for reading and for your feedback. Thanks for the warm welcome too. I'm loving this community...

  • 4 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Amazing piece Gracy! I totally love it. The poem is actually sublime itself!

    • 4 years ago

      by Gracy Judith

      Glad you liked it. Thank you so much Rania...your feedback means a lot.

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