by Hellon
You have a couple of little grammatical errors here but I will definitely overlook them in favour of the topic. This was so raw and just heartbreaking. I know it should NOT happen today but, sadly as we all know, it still DOES. |
Thank you for your kind review of my work. I really appreciate it. I just notice some of the said gramatical errors and made some corrections. Please feel free to point out the ones I miss so I can correct it. Thank you. |