Beautiful! Loved it!

This is beautiful...I mean you need to remove 'a' from the first line, and I think you could un-capitalise the line beginnings as there's no punctuation (so it's a little distracting). Other than that, I adore the simplicity of this, and whilst I'm not huge on repetition in small poems, it works here. One thing I was curious about what was who the narrator was. Incredibly soothing poem, Luce. :)