by Poet on the Piano Jun 26, 2020
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
We're running out of water. |
by nouriguess
What I like about most of your writes is that you just pour out your heart and still manage to come up with striking and original poetry. |
Thank you all <3 |
by D.
I read this poem half a dozen times. There's something almost hypnotic about it. There's a desperation, a frustration that lingers throughout. It's masterfully written. |
Particularly topical at this time with the weather hotter than normal (in the UK at least) and no rain for what seems forever. I realised it was a metaphor and a great one at that but the running out of water was initially what grasped my attention because I'm not a great lover of water but have been having to drink it to keep hydrated. Glad to see it nominated. Milly x |
by Everlasting
I read this piece over and over again and I cannot pin point why I like it so much. I get immerse in the words. |
by Star
This soooooo sad and very creative I felt like screaming after reading this. ! You nailed the metaphor!! |