Random Senryu
by Everlasting Jun 27, 2020
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4 years ago
by D.
I enjoy your 'random' poems. I like poems that are tiny snapshots of a bigger picture, as this one is. Who is the girl? Is she upset because she's sick and can't play out? Is she lonely? Is she grounded? I love it.
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4 years ago
by BOB GALLO
I like the contrast of teary eyes and wet happiness.
Seems both sides live in the opposite eyeball of wetness: happiness versus woe,
