Comments : Random Senryu

  • 4 years ago

    by BOB GALLO

    I like the contrast of teary eyes and wet happiness.
    Seems both sides live in the opposite eyeball of wetness: happiness versus woe,

  • 4 years ago

    by D.

    I enjoy your 'random' poems. I like poems that are tiny snapshots of a bigger picture, as this one is. Who is the girl? Is she upset because she's sick and can't play out? Is she lonely? Is she grounded? I love it.