From life.

by Bobby M.Peter   Jun 27, 2020


Strong wind comes.
Wind of hope ;Uprooted the thorns.
Flowers the desert
by rain of kindness.
No thorns now but flowers any where .
In the place of sadness and struggle,
comes the goodness and blessings now.

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  • 4 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Its a nice metaphor hope for flowers after the thorns and in the place of sadness and struggle comes the goodness and blessings now. Its what we all need right now. Milly x

  • 4 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Not bad..I liked it. You seem to write short poetry messages and I've been reading them.
    Just a thought, this line:

    "No thorns now but flowers any where"

    ^^did you mean every where..? That would make sense. Other then that nice read.
    Take care ~