Can't Write Another Poem

by LiL One   Jul 13, 2004


I cant write another poem,
I have no emotion left inside,
you took it all away from me,
after every time I cried.

You loved me,
then you lied,
how can I ever forgive you,
you took away my pride.

I look stupid as hell,
even my friends think so,
Ive sat around and waited,
for your true feelings to show.

Now it seems to me,
everything you said were lies,
like when you said,
you see yourself in my eyes.

I never wanted this to end on bad terms,
we used to be friends,
now its hard for me to look at you,
since we are at our ends.

This is the last poem Ill write,
until we work it out,
it will be hard for me,
because I know I care for you without a doubt.

I'm all burnt out,
you've put me through too much strife.
I cant write another poem,
until your out of my life.

This poem was really hard for me to write, but I feel as I if I need to explain the reason why I wont be writing another poem for awhile. I have nothing left, its not fair, but I know a poem is not good without emotion, so I owe myself and my readers a break. Of course I will still be looking at everyone Else's poems and maybe people will check out my old ones. I feel so worn out, emotionally and physically, I just need a break, I need to get my mind on different things. I'm sick of writing poems on how bad my relationship is and how sad I am, the next time I write a poem I wanna be happy!!! I'm so tired...Thanks for your support...LiL One

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  • 19 years ago

    by Princess 01

    I liked ur poem it was cool If you eva get a chance please go read one of my poems they not that good or nothing but maybe you could tell me how to improve on my writing

  • 20 years ago

    by Kristina K

    A very well-written piece of poetry. Extremely heartfelt; filled with emotions. Thank you for sharing this piece of art. Take care!
    Kind regards, Kristina

  • 20 years ago

    by LostInLife!

    what melissa has said is exactly what i wanted to say, i haven't writen a poem in a while untill yesterday, so would you please have a look! thanks!
    i really like your poem and you seem to have good talent shame you won't be writing for a bit
    jemma xxx

  • 20 years ago

    by Melissa

    Oh my god i can totally relate to your poem. Ive had the same problem. I just have no inspiration to write. Ive actually just wrote one today for the first time in ages but its not the best. This poem however was very good. I hope you can keep writing.

  • 20 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    This was a great poem... i'm so sorry to hear you won't be writing for awhile. Sometimes it's good just to stop writing, then when you eventually start back up again you'll have a whole lot of stuff to write about. Take care!

    ~Grace