by nouriguess Jul 1, 2020
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
He was my backbone, |
by D.
I love how honest your poetry is. You don't leave anything hiding. There's a lot of fragility in this poem, illustrated through two main verbs 'hunker' and 'burrow'. It really gives such a sense of loss and vulnerability. 'He was my backbone/I lost my spine' was really clever and effective. Extremely evocative writing as ever, Noura. |