Comments : Life's Path

  • 4 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Milly this is a beautiful piece and so poignant to think that any change in any part of your life before meeting your great love, could have prevented that from happening. Lovely! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 4 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you :) Each age group faces different challenges and adversities which help mould the person that we eventually become. So if I was to eradicate all the challenges I have faced then I would also eradicate the good that came from those challenges and risk being a different person who perhaps never found that love. Too high a price for me :) xx

  • 4 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This is such a heart warming love poem. The gratitude and peace is felt in each line and with perfect rhyme! Well done and good to see a new poem from you. Take care ~

    • 4 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thankyou Meena for your lovely comments and your warm welcome back. Its been a while since I felt like writing so its really nice to see its bringing enjoyment. Milly x

  • 4 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Wonderful poem Millie, I agree with Meena, metaphorical rhyme gets big Headlines in my Paper! very heart felt expressions, a Soul revealing pent up feelings. Added to my Favorites!

    • 4 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thankyou Ken for the lovely comments they mean a lot. Im really very happy that you liked it enougb to put it on your favourites. Milly x

  • 4 years ago

    by Ocean Chant

    I really enjoyed this, it felt like that sun you mentioned popped up throughout this reading, so thank you :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Walter

    Such a pleasant read Milly and I enjoyed sharing your journey while reading your poem, As always, beautifully written and well-expressed! x

  • 4 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I thought that was really great. Interesting lines, with wonderful rhymes woven through a flawless rhythm. The message and story, too were a joy to behold. Great work

  • 4 years ago

    by William Mae

    Beautiful write, the journey we take in life is a road we choose so at it’s completion it’s wonderful to be satisfied with how we traveled it. Just a great job writing this piece.

  • 4 years ago

    by Gracy Judith

    A very well-written poem depicting life's journey and the importance of the support of a loved one . With a loved one by your side, you can brave all storms life weaves. Loved it!
    Cheers x

  • 4 years ago

    by Em

    Milly, this is beautiful xx

  • 4 years ago

    by Matt Carroll

    Well-written and refreshing. Excellent.

  • 3 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello, stranger:)
    Nice to see you. I know that this is an older piece, but it still bears up. We are living in difficult times, but for some today's issues are just another layer to cope with. Isolation does not mean no contact it means thinking of creatively to help one another.

    I hope you are well xx

    • 3 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Not too bad. The being stuck in doors most of the time is normal for me. Having to remember to disinfect everything coming into the house and not being able to have visitors or see family is much more difficult. Hope you and your family are keeping well and safe Xx