Cerulean Sky

by Gracy Judith   Jul 3, 2020


words
loose-limbed
unfettered
reckless
spill
black on white
while I keep casting spells
whipping the sun, moon, and stars
out of my pen...
I then sit gazing
at the
half tempest
half calm
half poem-like
cerulean sky

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  • 4 years ago

    by Lucas Woods

    That was indeed a nice read.

  • 4 years ago

    by D.

    This is a dreamlike, abstract poem, dotted with flowery, soft language. I would be careful about repetition through your poems. 'Unfettered' for example. It's not a criticism, but certain adjectives and phrases may lose their strength over time if overused. This poem works as it feels as if it was written in a journal around 3AM, it has that sleepy, otherworldly feel.

    • 4 years ago

      by Gracy Judith

      Your right Daniel. Unfettered was indeed a repetition. I did not realise it. Thanks for pointing that out. Will make sure to avoid repetitions in the future. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Much appreciated.

  • 4 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I like this. A simple layout where individual words are penned to connect each other loosely yet make it all connected.
    The fact that there are no capital letters, punctuation or any stanzas it's as your thoughts been jotted down "in the now" as you gaze at the moon - hope that made sense.
    I liked the visuals and the choice of words. Nicely penned!

    • 4 years ago

      by Gracy Judith

      Thank you so much Meena. Really appreciate your reading and reviewing this.

  • 4 years ago

    by Brenda

    love your words, visuals are dreamy.

  • 4 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Simple but powerful. An enjoyable read. Milly x

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