Simple but powerful. An enjoyable read. Milly x

love your words, visuals are dreamy.

I like this. A simple layout where individual words are penned to connect each other loosely yet make it all connected.
The fact that there are no capital letters, punctuation or any stanzas it's as your thoughts been jotted down "in the now" as you gaze at the moon - hope that made sense.
I liked the visuals and the choice of words. Nicely penned!

This is a dreamlike, abstract poem, dotted with flowery, soft language. I would be careful about repetition through your poems. 'Unfettered' for example. It's not a criticism, but certain adjectives and phrases may lose their strength over time if overused. This poem works as it feels as if it was written in a journal around 3AM, it has that sleepy, otherworldly feel.

That was indeed a nice read.