Comments : Your Love, That I Hate (thank you)

  • 4 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    We crave to be loved yet the worse kind of love is being loved in a way that we dont want to be loved. This piece twists and turns and shows a feeling of being propelled into a place where the character doesnt want to be. Almost as if being told everything will be alright is false devoid of truth. Only when the truth that things are not ok will make room for love A thought provoking piece. Milly x

    • 3 years ago

      by Ocean Chant

      Exactly. Thank you for your words Milly :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Why does it hurt so much to be loved? This is something most of us can relate to. "Just leave him" they say, but it's not that easy...

    Nicely laid out poem.

    Take care