by D. Jul 8, 2020
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
The campfire is comforting; |
by Milton
I really enjoyed this! I like the idea of trying to relax around a campfire, something that's comforting and using that as a way to feel safe. But at the same time everything is falling apart, and you try to forget or to make it easier. It's good! Great job! |
by D.
Thanks Milton! :) Glad you liked it. |
I've read this every day and have been waiting for the perfect time to comment. I feel like this had such layers, and it's not explicitly spelled out for the reader, but it's more than imagery and atmosphere you give. The hesitancy that links to the title, the anticipation, the fear. I read this initially as each stanza giving way to more trepidation, more caution. The first stanza is so pure, complete bliss, and then the further realizations that the knowledge and awareness of the chaos in the world makes us vulnerable. We can't look away, we can't NOT be a part of it. |
by D.
Thank you MA as ever. :) I'm always interested in what you take out of poetry and how you dissect it! |