Comments : Invisible Walls

  • 4 years ago

    by Brittany Klein

    Being a child was probably the best thing most people can remember in their life's. They are the years where we look to the stars and find the sky has so many wonders and we dream so big and think we can accomplish so much.

    But then we start growing up and realize that some things just weren't meant to be. We can dream that we can do this and do that but what has limited us is what those around us tell us we can or cant do. Only those brave enough to go off the beaten path accomplish big things.

    But I love this piece as you are telling us that we dont have to do what society or anyone else tells us. We can eat dessert FIRST if we want. We do not have to do it last, we make our own path!

    Great Poem!

  • 4 years ago

    by Walter

    Thanks so much for reading and your comment Brittany and yes, there are no rules that say life has to be this way. I truly believe this is the time we should be enjoying it the most and there is nothing stopping us but our own self.