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Vivid imagery that portrays very well the evils of conflict in the home. Its steeped in bitterness and depicts all that is bad in a relationship gone wrong. An excellent write. Milly x

A very well-written piece depicting differences between two lovers and how bitterness lingers and hurt does not heal. I love the use of the word skulk here...works very well. Cheers...

The details! the details..sweet-god..the semicolon, how I appreciate the way this piece ended. So much emotions...I can feel every single line. I even read this in my head in such a slam-poetry tone because of its intensity. One of my favorites.