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I'm loving these short pieces!

I adore short poetry so much more than long poetry because it takes skill to write them. Thinking about lines and making a story out of them especially when your word count is limited is a fun activity.

After this person you become more creative and that tells me you are in a better mental place. For me when i write i have to be mentally clear to be able to focus fully on a poem. So i love the first two lines as they resemble happiness and a freedom a lot of people don't have.

You use your pain to be creative and use your pain for writing at least that is what the next two lines tell me. I love love the words 'making love' here because there could be a fine line between hurt and comfort with love making. You kind of did both here because

You make masterpieces with the pain but also struggle. Loved the story here

Love this!

Short but dynamic delivery Loved it. Milly x

So cool, love the content and the concept.