Comments : The Last Poem

  • 4 years ago

    by Liz

    "You made me feel beautiful.
    I wish I could frame those moments in glass
    so I could shatter them and cut myself...
    Laugh and bleed, not care at all.
    I hate that I wasted sentiments, pet names
    and tender thoughts on you."

    ^i love the wording throughout the whole poem, but this stanza here is definitely my favorite.

    A sentiment that many can relate to and you've penned it beautifully.

  • 4 years ago

    by Brenda

    Oh, this brings back memories of days past....nominated