by Liz
I love how calming reading this piece has made me feel. Hoping to nominate this once I'm able! |
by Gracy Judith
Thank you so very much Liz for the nomination and for the feedback. |
by D.
I enjoyed the form of this, as it dictates the speed, especially throughout the middle. It's a very clever poem. I particularly loved the wording: |
by Gracy Judith
Thanks you so much Daniel. I always value your feedback. I do appreciate you breaking down the poem and commenting. I do need pointers sometimes as I go with the flow and overlook punctuation. I got rid of the extra ellipsis. I will endeavour not to overly word my lines-- it's going to be difficult but I will try :-) |