This is so interesting! I love brevity in poems for this very reason. There's a great deal to be said, and readers can interpret it however they like and still not pinpoint exactly why you wrote it, as there is some mystery to it still. |
by Star
Thank you ^_^ |
by Gracy Judith
Nice once Star! I love brevity in poems...one can convey a lot in few words. |
by Star
Thank you Gracy ^_^ |
by Ben Pickard
This is excellent, Star. I love MA's comment. I, too, wondered about the different connotations of what the 'load' actually was. Almost like an art-house film (which I adore), this leaves you gasping for more! |
by Star
It’s the magic of the 13 words poems, they themselves are some sort of “pockets”. |