by Milton
That guy would be really lucky to have you though! He wouldn't be scarred, he'd be healed! =) But I like your poem! It's really sad and genuine. I feel like it's about being scared to have somebody. I'm the same way. Like maybe even if I did find them, would I mess it up somehow because of all my bad luck? I've actually worried about this for so long myself. But I wanna get better too. Anyways, enough about me. lol. I enjoyed your poem! I hope your scars aren't running too deep and that you find happiness! The ending is really good! It reinforces that fear of feeling hurt. Great job! |
Very emotive, this piece reads like a very personal write which gives it an added intensity. |