that was a cute poem .. i can realte check out come of my poems later .. Good job i liked it

Aww, so nice :)

Oh my gosh..that was sooo good!!

I was grasped the entire time and then it took that turn at the end which made it even more real cuz that is so true with so many of us! First kisses are such a special moment and it sux when it is wasted on some nobody

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