Comments : Foreseen

  • 4 years ago

    by Star

    Your ending...... </3

  • 4 years ago

    by Skyfire

    I like the reflection of the shades at the beginning and the shadows at the end.

    "I never wake up wearing the same shadow again..." To me, this paints the picture that the trauma the speaker has endured created a convoluted mess of dark emotion - they will forever be caught in a different shade of despair.

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A particularly dark read, Rania, but me being me, I loved it...

    Take care