its pretty good but sumthing just isnt quite right

that was really good and totally made the point i've been tryna make to my friends, just because i wear black doesn't make me a goth i wear white and pink and alll colours too, just because i listen to music with screamin in it doesnt make me a metal head i listen to punk and pop too, just because just because i think chicks are stupid doesn't make me a tomboy guys are stupid too, etc etc i hate being classified because of one thing i do, and that totally said what i've been tryna say, nice work!

great poem...good message!!!!