Comments : Loss

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This perfectly encapsulates the chaos that can surround a broken heart and the leaving of someone we care so much about.

    • 4 years ago

      by Skyfire

      Thank you so much Ben, it is a chaotic feeling indeed.

  • 4 years ago

    by Gracy Judith

    Congratulations on this well-deserved win! Absolutely beautiful! Poignant and so touching. I love the below lines:

    From the moment
    you left
    I felt a howl inside of me
    one that never
    leaves, only quiets -
    and sometimes
    it's so loud
    it shakes my teeth.

    AND

    My tongue swells up
    and a soft keening
    is all the noise
    I can make.

    • 4 years ago

      by Skyfire

      Thank you Gracy, very kind of you!