by Michael
This is a nice and short poem STAR. I really Don't feel anything needs adding. It tells me of a twilight moment, when the sun sets and the 'hustle' of the evening settles to a quietness:) |
by Star
Oooops I read over that so many times and I didnt see it lol!! |
by prasanna
Love this!! |
by Star
Thanks!! |
by Everlasting
I wish to write you a detail comment but I don’t think I can at the time. So, I’m just going to spit and post whatever comes from my first read. |
by Star
I recently realized its fun to rewrite and edit my poems , maybe one day i will^_^ thank you! |