Vague Vision

by Star   Sep 27, 2020


The voice preached within
her veins, passed to her head
then pressed on her skin.
Her lashes fluttered and the
shackled eyes attempted escape
from dark dungeons.
Leash like muscles slowly tore,
shattering the images her brain
delicately crafted.

    report violation
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  • 4 years ago

    by Sunshine

    You know how I'm so into micro poetry! This is svery delicate and the word choice felt so natural. I like how the content itself felt vague for me in connotation with your title.

    The last few phrases were so powerful! shattering / delicately..the twist was deep.

    • 4 years ago

      by Star

      Even if I didnt know it’s obvious :p you write a lot of short poems!!!

      Thank you <3

  • 4 years ago

    by Lost star

    Wonderfully written! I love the expression within the word choices here. Wonderful.

    • 4 years ago

      by Star

      Thank you ^_^

  • 4 years ago

    by prasanna

    !!!

    • 4 years ago

      by Star

      ???

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