by Violet Raven
Love this! |
by Brenda
Beautiful Andrea! |
Those last few lines are my absolute favorite, and give me chills and sadness. "breath" should be "breathe" though, but I felt that constriction in this. The inability to truly breathe in and out, in the moment, and trying to process another's emotions and feelings toward you. |
by Star
This gives me chills, and I see you in this poem there us so much depth in it! |
by Walter
Wow! |