Comments : Reality Bites

  • 4 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Walter, this is absolutely heart-breaking. I loved how you gave specific visuals about their usual place, which makes it even more devastating to have to realize and process that they are gone, all over again, each morning. Nice rhyme scheme here, and overall, well done with truly sharing this person's stories/memories, and the way they are present in the places you go, and they'll be remembered there too.

  • 4 years ago

    by Walter

    Mary Anne, thankyou! And yes I hope this is something I will never have to experience. It would be devastating when for so long sharing daily routines with someone to suddenly be void without them while memories are still so strong.