Comments : Perception

  • 4 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Walter, this is wonderful. In a superficial world this is the slap that we all need. Each verse highlighting a fake way of being, then offers personal examples of the healthier alternative. In essence, if you are true to yourself, after all, we are lucky to have what we do.

    Walter, this is so inspiring, it's going into my favourites. I will nominate as soon as I can.

    Take care.

    • 4 years ago

      by Walter

      Mr. Darcy, thank you so much for reading and leaving such a wonderful comment! And it's so true what you say...I think we all desire to want more and often we forget to appreciate what we already have.

      Take care too and all the best :)

  • 3 years ago

    by Paul H

    There's a saying...
    "It's not having what you want
    It's WANTING what you HAVE."
    Your poem epitomises this saying perfectly!

  • 2 years ago

    by dominic chiori

    simple and concise

    • 2 years ago

      by Walter

      Thanks for reading :)