Dream Catcher Poem (Joseph's Star)

by Abstract Poet   Nov 16, 2020


You
are in my
dreams you will stay in
my dreams I have wondered where
my dreams will go but then my
dream catcher will catch
them all these
dreams.

Copyrighted By: Abstract Poet.

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Joseph's Star:
1/3/5/7/7/5/3/1 is the syllable count.

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  • 3 years ago

    by Abstract Poet

    I don't know how this could be a run-on sentence I was having trouble coming up with the words. I'd writer's block, please don't judge me wrong it was my first time trying a Joseph's Star Form.

  • 3 years ago

    by East Poetry

    I mean I really like the shape of the poem. but I struggle with where your going with any deep meaning... the last two layers of the poem scream run on sentence, but I know it's an abstract poem and rules don't apply... so I go back to trying to find some deeper meaning. Then wonder what your trying to inspire in my mind. Sry... don't mean to be harsh...

    you know what would her really cool if I could read the poem backwards and it had a cohesive logic and meaning!!! Ehh... that that would be killer abstract!

    • 3 years ago

      by Abstract Poet

      Thank you, Randy! It was my first time trying this form I have some trouble coming up with the words I wanted to say.

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